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Old 19-12-2017, 11:25   #1
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Loose cannon on deck is the whole book not just the log book, this is a big book, of the whole story.
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Re: Loose Cannon On Deck

Care to elaborate...
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https://www.amazon.com.au/gp/product...?ie=UTF8&psc=1

Something to read on the plane when heading back to work
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Re: Loose Cannon On Deck

What confuses me, is that in Colonial English "cannon" can be singular or plural, so I don't know if he's talking about just one hazard, or a whole battery of them. And if they're all moving about, are they still considered a battery of cannon? As opposed to, you know, a horde or something?
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Re: Loose Cannon On Deck

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https://www.amazon.com.au/gp/product...?ie=UTF8&psc=1

Something to read on the plane when heading back to work
None of it makes any sense to me and the link to Amazon doesn't work.

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Re: Loose Cannon On Deck

Well there is 4 minutes of my life that I will never get back
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Well there is 4 minutes of my life that I will never get back
Yeah, can I get a refund? Tried to read the intro...too bad and cliche to get thru...and painfully obviously written by someone with little knowledge of sailing.

Is the lady on the front cover supposed to be levitating?
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Re: Loose Cannon On Deck

My brain hurts from reading as much of the trial copy as I could......
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Well haven't started reading it yet so might have to get a backup for the flight lol
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Loose cannon on deck is the whole book not just the log book, this is a big book, of the whole story.
Are you the author ? If so, I strongly recommend you hire a professional editor to correct the atrocious grammar.
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Re: Loose Cannon On Deck

2 minutes is all it took. Couldn’t go any further with all the grammatic errors.
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2 minutes is all it took. Couldn’t go any further with all the grammatic errors.
Punctuation, grammar and spelling are all so bad as to make it unreadable to me after the first few pages.

Without a major re-write by a competent editor, I doubt that anyone will be able to get through the whole book.

Fortunately, I only downloaded the trial extract. Even free, I wouldn't waste my time downloading the whole book.
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Autobiography?
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Re: Loose Cannon On Deck

I think we will consider the book having being reviewed and commented on.
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