A few more comments...
I don't like the white frames for the stills... I would like to see some of them bleed and over lap more... even transparencies ... if possible...
I love your homage to crews... maybe put that at the end.
Also the still and the fabulous vids don't always
work together. I love love love the vids and it makes me want to sail with YOU...
Sailing is an awakening... not a journey... you can journey in a
boat... but the best thing which I think you reveal is how sailing awakens YOU (and us) to so much... inside... in nature... in science...philosophy... in everything... It can be communal or solitary...
It's pretty overwhelming... and you made a beautiful seductive presentation on your first try... I can't image what you could do in the second or third maybe with a pro to help a bit.